Wise: Day 1, Chapter 4 by ThePete (my new novella)

OK, well, it's looking like the title of this novella will be changing soon since "Day 1" is proving to have fewer pages than I expected. I blame Twitter! :)

ANYway, here are the pages from last night! Yep, Chapter 4, complete with un-proofread typos, I'm sure:

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AS ALWAYS: I would love to hear any feedback you have ASSUMING IT IS NOT about typos, spelling mistakes or grammatical errors. These are all first drafts I'm posting, so no fair holding that against me. ;) Anything else is fair game, but if you're rude or unhelpful, I may ignore you. But if you read any of it, you should know I GREATLY APPRECIATE IT!! Seriously, I do. Honest.

Wise: Day 1, Chapter 3 by ThePete (my new novella)

OK, so I set up a new page on TheWikiPeteia which you can get to easily here: http://sn.im/wiseday1 That's also a link you should hit up if you have no idea what I'm talking about. :)

So, here's a link to Chapter 3 of my novella-in-progress Wise: Day 1

http://sn.im/wised1c3

Here is an embed of the same PDF so you can read it right here on thepete.com:

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Please feel free to leave comments! Just don't bother being critical with any spelling or grammar mistakes--THIS IS A FIRST DRAFT and I have not even proofread it. I'm just getting the story out, warts and all. Giving me feedback about those kinds of errors won't help me. Telling me what you think works with story, character, and other, similar, elements will be of great help. So will nagging me if you don't see new pages up within the next 24 hours, so please feel free to bug me. Thanks!

Wise: Day 1 Update: new pages later today...

OK, so, I know I was supposed to have another chapter by midnight, but I got a little carried away and did seven pages instead of the usual two. I'm now just way too wiped out to upload anything now, but I will do it when I wake up. I really wish there was a way to easily provide PDFs on the fly--as soon as I save them, they're available. Ah well...

See you soon with 7 more pages. It gets exciting! We get answers! Who is Wise? Where/when is he from? Clues abound!

Wise: Day 1, Chapter 2 by ThePete (my new novella)

Here is Chapter 2 of my new novella entitled Wise: Day 1. I know, it's a bit later than I said it would be, earlier on Monday, but it's kinda close to midnight still.

Anyway, so if you haven't read what this is all about, check out this post, which contains chapter 1 of Wise: Day 1. Already read it? Then here's chapter 2:

Downloadable PDF of Wise: Day 1, Chapter 2

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As always, PLEASE REMEMBER: this is a FIRST DRAFT! No fair citing typos, spelling mistakes and grammatical errors! But please feel free to tell me what you think of everything else. Most of all, THANKS FOR READING!!! :)

Wise Day 1, Chapter 1 by ThePete (my new novella)

OK, remember my Battlestar Galactica series finale scripts? Well, I'm trying out some prose this time 'round! Here are the first 2 pages of a novella I'll be writing daily (starting yesterday). I aim to update every night at midnight.

What's it about?

It's called Wise: Day 1 and it's about a guy from the future who is trying to catch up with an alien who has trapped his body in a... well, it's better if you just read it--not that this first chapter explains it. But have a read and feel free to let me know what you think. Just don't be upset if I don't agree with you or don't reply immediately or at all. I'm really swamped and barely have time to write, let alone thank/interact with everyone for/about their thoughts. Just know that I do appreciate any constructive criticism. Comments about typos and grammar mistakes are useless to me as I am not editing this or even proofing this as I go. It's first draft all the way through. If typos bug you, DON'T READ IT.

OK, enough of this! Here goes the PDF embed and feel free to download the 60KB PDF for yourself here.

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Chapter 2 will happen tonight with any luck :)